The prison was cold, and smelled rancid from the hot day's blistering heat. No fresh air had come in to remove it. I sat alone on my bunk waiting for my captors to tell me why I am here. What do they want from me? I am having difficulty dealing with the transformation. No longer Vulcan I cannot meditate deeplly like I was accustomed too.
I wait and wait. They have given something to eat while I slept. I am angry . I should not fallen into slumber. But the heat of the day and the change had exhausted me. What fragile bodies these humans have.
I wonder if Jim will find me. I wish I had told him yesterday. I am still unsure what he might say but I cannot continue to live in denial. He has made me realize how much I need him in my life. What would he say? Now, what would he do seeing me like this? No longer Vulcan, a human like him.
Love this screencap! It's so nice and defined...hmmm...might try something with it...stay tuned...and yes, of course the story is gorgeous...you capture Spock's personality so vividly!
Oh thank you..I can't write fic...really I can't..I am trying..have many other one's I can't wait to post...so I am going to continue the story..should prove interesting...
Why do you say you can't write, when obviously you can, and very well indeed? I can't wait to read more...please, please continue to post them, they're very good! :-D
Ah thanks my dear. It is the grammar and punctuation ...also that I am french speaking I guess..I just feel intimidated with so many other talented people here...I will try to do my best..thanks again..
But I see no problems at all with your English grammar, I wish I could be as fluent with French and German...all I can do is utter a simple phrase here and there...we used to have a cable TV show here in my area that was French, I believe it was called TV5...I loved to watch and try to follow along, but then it was deleted from our cable system, a huge loss for someone like me, who loves to listen to French and read it, too...it's been so long since I've done anything at all with French...but for you, you seem to be very adaptable, and your grammar flows so perfectly! I know native-speaking Americans whose English is so fractured, one can barely make out what it is they're trying to say---you put people like that to shame!
I did..and yes he is hot..and wait to you see the next pics I am posting...the screencaps are pretty good..sorry I still can't figure out how to send them to you ...so I will do it this way. And I did write the little story...not very good with grammar and punctuation..I speak french too...but still even in that language I am not good when it comes to getting the spelling right..so do forgive me...Poetry is easier and have an easier time since it isn't long and complicated but to the point. The other stories I posted I had help from by beta..so that made such a big difference...thanks for commenting....now need to write part 2...still waiting for you two stories....the bar one and the phone conversation one...can't wait..
I am excited!!!! So very excited!!! Yay! I like that you write little stories or poems with them....about my stories. Right now I am writing a short story...yeah. XD I just had a weird dream a few weeks ago and i had to write about it. It's freaking weird.
Cannot wait...I hope it's ok I asked to be friends on facebook..you are the first person I have met that we click pretty well together and we are having fun on facebook also...take care and good luck on your story...