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I played the innocent again today.

Don't worry, I did not put on a display.

It was subtle, brilliant some would say.

It happened when Jim got his hypospray.


I could have waited my turn.

But, I needed to feel his skin, that slow burn.

It is something I crave, I yearn.

But I am a fool, I shall never learn.


It lasted for only moments so few.

I would give so much, to be one with you.

But I am pleased to be friends too.

So my secret stays, there is nothing else I can do.


I hold on to the memory of your touch again.

Playing in my mind as a sweet refrain.

I close my eyes and that moment shall remain.

Permanently etched in my brain.

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:iconiknowbetter-now:
This is SO H O T and the poem is so good I just HAD to favorite it. ;-D
THANK YOU SO MUCH for posting this! :-D
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:iconslashygirl:
It's always nice to hear comments like yours..I have two poems by this name...the first one ..is when he plays innocent the first time...it must be somewhere in my gallery..I have over 300 deviations...lots to watch....
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:iconiknowbetter-now:
Wow! :overwhelmed: :eye candy: really!?
My gosh! You're VERY Prolific ;-D
Thanks for letting me know. *Chuckling blush!* Now I know where to go for any and all of my Trek "porn"? ...
*Lol EMBARRASSED B L U S H!*
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:iconelfqueen55:
This poem is so cool...and yes, very very sad...I admire proflic super-writers like CMM, how do they do it, where do they find the time and how do they come up with so many fabulous plots? I haven't been able to write a thing in over two years...but I definitely LOVE to read, especially if it's TOS! :)
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:iconslashygirl:
Same here..Another great writer who helped at the beginning when I posted my first poem was Simone Allen. She just posted something on the archives actually...The Glade...Must read..it made he laugh...and reminded of my Denial and Acceptance story I wrote....But hers was so well done....the humour made you laugh so hard and they felt so in character...I could hear their voices...it was so uncanny.....
[link] Here is the link if you are interested....
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:iconelfqueen55:
I read it, it was very sweet...I'm not much for the sweet and romantic stuff, though...I don't believe in romance at all, I'm more drawn to the difficulties and anguish that naturally occur in a loving relationship and how the two characters fight their way through to the other side...I prefer tension in stories, but I must admit I admire Miss Allen's prolific story plots! Wow! How does she do it? Where do all of these story ideas come from?

I'm an utter failure, I think, at K/S, because I have such a hard time imagining situations that might generate a good enough story...I'll have to make do with my two short stories, my two novels and the big, giant WIP that will probably never ever see the light of day...which now that I think of it is probably a GOOD thing...LOLOL!

But Simone Allen is massively gifted, I read most of what is over there of hers and was very impressed! :)
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:icontydomin:
Another sweet poem, of course... Now, what is that screencap from? Is it Bread and Circuses? Darn I just can't remember...
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:iconslashygirl:
It is from Patters of Force..the famous half naked, cuffs, whipping episode...lol...

Now, are you still interested in knowing how to post pics on the archives...let me know...I shall try to describe it to you the most easiest way possible..

Plus I see you updated...on your story....have to catch up on some chapters...Did you mention you were a little tipsy when you wrote it...bad girl...

P.S. I am so going to miss dear heart when you are gone to Finland..

P.P.S.

the person that wrote Aftershave balm is a friend of mine on facebook..I believe she is from the UK and she is a teacher...Not a 100 percent certain...but I told her to post her story because it was amazing....She will think about writing more...so excited....She just understood the original guys so well....We need more stories from the original...

I am reading an Mpreg though from Vulcan Pearl I believe it is her...It's really a nice read so far...

Love you dear ..take care ..and stay away from the booze....
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:icontydomin:
Oh... Patterns of Force! Of course... silly me.

Yes, do tell me how to post pics in the archive stories - if it's easy I'll give it a go...

I have indeed updated my story (by one chapter) - and I'm afraid I'm nearly always a little tipsy when I write anything... It helps! And also explains why I'm not as prolific as our dear CMM - if I were to write as much as her I'd never be sober, ever!

I liked Aftershave Balm - I did say in my review that I hoped to hear more from her! So it's somebody you know, eh? You know everyone, don't you! And we need more TOS fiction these days. Reboot is fun but it just doesn't have the emotional impact, for me...

much love xxx
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:iconslashygirl:
Another wonderful author who was my beta when I first started writing..that helped actually with my first chapter of Betrayal and Forgiveness is Simone Allen..she is from the U.K. and she just posted The Glade.. I believe..go read it..I laughed and it is so them....awesome read...

I will send you a note on how to post a pic on the archives...
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